Good apart from the volume
Have to say the idea behind it with the printer noises sounds really good, but it needs some improving in my opinion, starting with the volume.
Fixed the volume problem :)
Good mainstream track
Nice, but the bassline seemed a bit quiet.
I don't usually enjoy the whole pad house thing either, although this wasn't bad.
Would love to hear you make some dirtier stuff some time.
You certainly do.
Beautiful mate, this is some good house.
Love the off beat high pitch tappy effect, just completes the track.
The vocals are pretty cool too, although inaudible it gives it a nice glitchy feel.
Nothing I can think to improve on, except maybe the hat, but top track.
Nice house musics
Really liked it, perhaps needed something else though.
If it was any longer i'd say it needs a counter melody but for the short length that it is it works quite well.
Didn't mind it, remined me of something out of Super Mario.
Liked the break drum beat about halfway through, but the start needs to be improved on imo.
Keep working on it.
Thanks for the feedback. And yeah I will keep that in mind.
"Bass that makes me jiggle"
REALLY liked this.
Don't like trance much, but there was nothing I could do as soon as I heard that bass.
Keep it up (Y)
As said before, simple, but it works. Reminds me of a medievil game.. possible lull in a violent battle for some King to stare at his ex mistress or something.
Keep it up!
and evil medievil battle, MUHOAHAHAHA wut.
Remixes of this song are a dime a dozen, not bad though.
Think you really need to get some more happening in the track though.
Whether a counter melody or drum beat or something, would really perk it up.
Good, but not great.
Not bad man, despite it being a cover and your first track, I quite enjoyed it.
It's Rhys from school btw ;D.
Check out my shit sometime hey, coincidentally I use FL too.. haha.
Really liked the whole feel of this, original, odd and spacious.
Don't really like the string chord stabs during the breaks much.. but it's not hard to get over for the rest of it. =]
keep that shit up man.
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